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Second Draft

"Flying Car"

       In the future, I would like to drive vehicle innovation. The name of this car is "Flying Car". It has four wheels, two wings and the wings can folded. This car used gasoline for the movement. It can run 185 kilometers per hour in the air and can run 105 kilometers per hour on the road. A two-seat plane, brace of 8 meters, but then folded wings width of approximately 2.3 meters to a maximum weight of about 650 kilograms (Denchai,2011). This car will be sold around 7.5 million baht. I think this car is an innovation that will change our world in the next 10 years.

Reference

Denchai,M. (2011). Transition Roadable Aircraft. Retrieved from http://www.hilight.kapook.com/view/60601.

First Draft

"Flying Car"

       In the future, I would like to drive vehicle innovation. The name of this car is "Flying Car". It has four wheels, two wings and the wings can folded. This car used gasoline for the movement. It can run 185 kilometers per hour in the air and can run 105 kilometers per hour on the road. A two-seat plane, brace of 8 meters, but then folded wings width of approximately 2.3 meters to a maximum weight of about 650 kilograms (Denchai,2011). This car will be sold around 7.5 million baht. I think Flying Car  will be available in the next 10 years.

Reference

Denchai,M. (2011). Transition Roadable Aircraft. Retrieved from http://www.hilight.kapook.com/view/60601.

Outline

"Flying Car"

➸The name of the car is "Flying Car".

➸It has four wheels, two wings and the wings can folded.

➸It uses gasoline.

➸It can run 185 kilometers per hour in the air and it can run 105 kilometers per hour on the road.

➸It price is 7.5 million bath.

➸I think Flying Car will be available in the next 10 years.

➸(Denchai,2011)

➸Denchai,M. (2011). Transition Roadable Aircraft. Retrieved from http://www.hilight.kapook.com/view/6060.

 

Second Draft

Pluemjit Thinkaow

       Pluemjit Thinkaow is the greatest volleyball player of all time. Pluemjit is my favorite athlete. She is tall and white skin and short hair. She is not only good looking but she is also very good at volleyball and she is also a cute player. She plays volleyball position middle-blocker. Pluemjit top 3 in Games 2014 Asian Games in Incheon, South Korea.(A bronze medal in the history in period 48 years).

 In 2015 she got award most valuable player in the women's volleyball Asian Championship in 2015. I like  her because I love to play volleyball. I want to be a great volleyball player and I want to have shape like her. I think Pluemjit Thinkaow is athlete a lovely playing volleyball making I love her.

First Draft

Pluemjit Thinkaow

       Pluemjit Thinkaow is the greatest volleyball player of all time. Pluemjit is my favorite athlete. She is tall and white skin and short hair. She is not only good looking but she is also very good at volleyball and she is also a cute player. She plays volleyball position middle-blocker. Pluemjit top 3 in Games 2014 Asian Game in Incheon, South Korea.(Bronze history of indoor volleyball. Since joining the Asian Games in 48 years.) In 2015 she got award most valuable player in the women's volleyball Asian Championship in 2015. I like  her because I love to play volleyball. I want to be a great volleyball player and I want to have shape like her. I think Pluemjit Thinkaow is athlete a lovely playing volleyball making I love her.

Outline

-Her name is Pleumjit Thinkaow.
-She is tall and white skin. She has a short hair.
-She plays Volleyball position middle-blocker.
-She top 3 Games 2014 Asian Games in Incheon,South Korea  (Bronze history of indoor Volleyball. Since joining the Asian Games in 48 years.) A.D.2015 Most valueable player in the Women's Volleyball Asian Championship in 2015
-I like her because I love to play Volleyball. I want to be a great Volleyball player and I want to have shape like her.
-She is athlete a lovely playing Volleyball making I love her.